Writing the News Story

Pick your Own Story

PICK YOUR OWN STORY

There are hundreds of stories all around you. Every person, every school, every community has a story to tell. Just keep Who, What, Where, When and Why in mind as you start off with a great lead, tell the story — maybe throwing in a quote or two — and finish off with an eye-catching headline. To make a REALLY great story, use a photo or a graphic.
To start you thinking, here are some of the stories recently turned in by 4th grade students for their newspaper:

Be Smart! Don't Start Smoking
Is Pluto Really a Planet?
Construction in Our Community
Help Save Asthma Sufferers
The Best Grandmother
People Like Ice-skating
Horseback Riding Dangers
The Funniest Teacher in School
What is a Twin?
The Secrets of Soccer
What It's Like to Be in Middle School
Don't Do Drugs
Sounds of Wind Instruments
A New Teacher
Dangerous Reptiles
Kids' Right to Vote
Harry Potter
Do Students Have Too Much Homework?
A Hero in Our Midst
Nintendo's Next Game
The Best Book Fair
Halloween Safety Rules
The Vice Principal Talks about School
My New Baby Sister
Online Safety
Homemade Costumes
Kids for President
Taking a Look at Space
Homeless (A True Story)
What It's Like to Be a High Schooler
Being the Oldest
What's Your Favorite Sport?
Why is P.E. a Popular Subject?
Abby Wambach: A Great Soccer Player
Where is Celion Dion Now?
What Boys and Girls Like to Wear
Chorus Concert
Going for the Gold
School Clubs
Department News

Give you an idea? Cool. Let's write a newspaper story!

Story Ideas

Teachers attending the 2001 ASNE High School Institute at the University of Texas at Austin brainstormed "evergreen" story ideas that can be made interesting with a wide range of sources.
· What kinds of cars do students and teachers drive?
· Tips on staying physically fit and healthy.
· Favorite doughnuts and snack foods.
· Shadow community professionals -- interview them about their careers, etc.
· Profile famous alums.
· Find out about historical markers near school and profile the school's history.
· Migrant workers in your community -- they may be the parents of some of the students at your school.
· Food recipes -- after-school snacks, ethnic foods.
· Run a trivia contest in every issue.
· What do you feed a football player (training and diet regimens).
· Profile students with parents who teach on campus.
· Car care tips.
· Interview teachers who graduated from your campus.
· Zero-tolerance laws (students who've been punished under these laws and the views of
administrators and parents).
· First impressions of high school freshman (contrast with seniors).
· Sound off -- pro & con about an issue (with headshots of interviewees).
· Project stories on health issues such as anorexia or diabetes.
· Parents' careers and the world of work.
· Students in the digital age

Teachers from the 2001 ASNE High School Institute at Hampton University in Hampton, Va., came up with the following ideas for generating story ideas:
· Check local and daily newspapers
· Check Internet sites of teen interest and schools
· Check online student newspapers
· Talk with the school's public relations person
· Talk with coaches, guidance counselors, secretaries and the principal
· Talk with the principal's advisory group or cabinet
· Talk with student council members and the sponsor
· Survey teachers about unusual assignments, clubs they sponsor, students in their classes who are involved in interesting activities.
· "Beat Letters" for all clubs, organizations, teams, department heads, PTA, custodian or maintenance works, librarians.
· Contact parent groups, such as athletic boosters or band boosters
· Walk around the school and take note of posted fliers
· Look at the sports calendar, district calendar and school calendar
· Ask your friends what they would like to see in the paper
· Survey students in the school newspaper or as a class assignment
· Contact cafeteria workers, bus drivers, maintenance personnel, etc.
· Watch local and national news programs for stories that might interest your audience
· Exchange newspapers with other schools
· Brainstorm in class
· Seek out students, coaches, teachers, staff, alumni or clubs to profile
· Contact the alunni group
· Check out other media for new releases, such as CDs, movies or books
· "Play Detective" -- ask questions about things that have sparked your curiosity
· Ask your peers to write letters to the editor, columns, editorial cartoons or to participate in "manon- the-street" columnns
· Check out school policies or the code of conduct
· Attend school board meetings

Asimov's Dirty Dozen

Asimov's Dirty Dozen Elements Of a Standard News Story
By Nanette Asimov, San Francisco Chronicle

The following are general guidelines for writing a basic news article. Each number represents a new paragraph. Their order is somewhat flexible. Some of the elements may be augmented. Some may be dropped, though never the lede* or nut graf. These are not firm rules, but the ingredients of a successful story.
* Note some strange spellings, such as "lede" (the first sentence) and "graf" (paragraph).
Certain code words date back to the days of hot lead type, when intentional misspellings were used to communicate with printers in the backshop. This way, printers could recognize instructions meant for them, and would know not to let them be printed in the newspaper.

1. First sentence ("lede")
Make the first sentence the NEWS. No dilly-dallying. News is the newest thing. Was there a vote? Did someone die? Was someone appointed? Was there a protest? Is big money being offered? Wasted? Time for background later. Lede should be SHORT, yet must tell who, what, when and where. Don't overload it with details.
EXAMPLE: The San Francisco school board voted unanimously last night to raise the hurdle for high school graduation by adding more mandatory math and science classes.
IMPORTANT: Recognize news; don't bury it. Sometimes the news is more than one thing. If the teachers union had threatened to sue the board, then your lede must include that key fact in a single, tight sentence: Despite the threat of a lawsuit by teachers, the San Francisco school board voted unanimously last night to require more math and science classes in high school.

2. Second sentence gives more details about the first. Save details for the second graf. Avoid packing them into the lede:
EXAMPLE: The board voted 7 to 0 on the proposal by Superintendent Jill Rojas to require high school students to take a third year of math and science; a second year of foreign language and the arts; more health classes and fewer electives,such as wood shop.

3. Sexy quote.
Select the quote that best illustrates the points made in the lede and second sentence. When out gathering news, a reporter should remember to listen for that "sexy quote," or ask the question that is likely to produce it.
EXAMPLE: "It's shameful to think that in the 21st century, a student can graduate from a California high school after completing only two years of math and two years of science," Rojas told the board. "Four-year colleges do not seek to admit students with such minimal requirements. Doors are closed to some students before they are 18 years old."


4. The "nut graf."
In this essential paragraph -- or paragraphs -- the writer steps back from the immediate events to provide context. This graf tells how the current news fits into the larger picture. It tells what's been happening lately or elsewhere, so the reader knows why story matters.
EXAMPLE: The school board's action mirrors efforts around the country to raise academic standards. Embarrassed by American students' poor performance on international achievement tests in recent years, and pressured by colleges to produce better-prepared graduates, public educators nationwide are turning back to basics. And that means students everywhere are facing more lessons in reading, writing and arithmetic -- and less art, music and perennial favorites like wood shop.

5. Summary of what's to come.
Here the writer lays out the varying points of view, foreshadowing the details of the rest of the story. This summary is key to fairness: No one's point of view is paramount if all are summarized toward the beginning of the story.
EXAMPLE: At the school board meeting in San Francisco, several teachers said the plan was long overdue. But others were furious. Many who teach the highest levels of math and science predicted that the quality of their rigorous courses will inevitably be watered down if students of all levels are forced to take them. A number of teachers also warned that dropout rates would rise if art and shop classes are neglected.

6. Supporting quotes, in backwards order.
This quote should support the last point of view summarized in the previous graf.
EXAMPLE: "I'm very worried," said Sylvester Smith, a 10th-grade English teacher. "You board members don't realize that wood shop keeps kids coming to school."

7. Transition, then another supporting quote.
Quotes from two people should never be back to back. A transition is needed as a bridge from one idea to another. Then follow up with the relevant quote. Quotes are usually in a separate paragraph to set them off.
EXAMPLE: For months, several of the district's top teachers have spoken out against the superintendent's plan to raise graduation requirements. At school board meetings, those teachers have said the plan looks better on paper than in reality because many students are ill- prepared to do well in higher-level math and science classes.
"This won't help poor students do better," said Jon James, a chemistry teacher. "It will hurt the students who do well."


8. Transition, then final supporting quote.
Notice that the supporting quotes go in reverse order from the way they were summarized in #5, the summary graf.
EXAMPLE: Not all teachers opposed the plan, and some were downright enthusiastic. "I teach in middle school," said Mary Mustard, "and I think the new requirements will give students a reason to study harder in the earlier grades."


9. Real-time color, anecdotes, examples.
This need not be confined to this section. "Color" means brief descriptions of sights, sounds and mood.
EXAMPLE: School board members debated the graduation plan for almost 90 minutes. Restless students, teachers and parents waited for the vote, the sound of their private conversations rising with their impatience. As the din from their chatter grew louder, board members called for quiet and even ejected some offenders from the auditorium.

10. The past
Is there additional history that can help the reader understand more about the subject? Has this sort of thing happened before? How is this time different or similar?
EXAMPLE: It has been 20 years since San Francisco's high school graduation standards were raised and 10 years since they were lowered again.

11. The future
Wind up the story by looking toward the future. What is the next step? Or if an anecdote is used up toward the top, a useful technique is to refer back to the beginning, or to the anecdote, to look to the future.
EXAMPLE: After the vote, a delighted Superintendent Rojas said she plans to propose new academic requirements in the lower grades, too.

12. The kicker
Usually a short, high-impact sentence. It may be a poignant or telling quote. In some stories, the kicker can be something that brings the reader back to an idea or anecdote told at the beginning.
Or it may be a surprising bit of information that works best at the end.
EXAMPLE: Turning to a group of supportive teachers who lingered to chat, Rojas suggested that calculus be taught as early as the fourth grade. The happy teachers frowned collectively. "Well," said Rojas. "It's just an idea."

Edit Your Story

Edit Your Story
You've written a GOOD story. But before you turn it in, edit it — go over the story again, fixing mistakes, maybe rewriting some things — and turn it into a GREAT story. Here's how.
1. Make sure you have included who - what - when - where - why - how.
2. Don't editorialize. That means, don't put in what you think or believe. For example, don't
write: "Science is the most useful subject you can take in school." That's your opinion
and other people might disagree with you. And, besides, how can you prove it?
3. Write clearly, using simple words. Imagine that you are telling the story to your friend.
4. Check the spelling of all words, especially people's names.
5. Make sure your quotes are accurate and in the proper form, like this:
"I enjoy being a safety patrol," Carol said. Remember: the comma goes inside the
quote mark.
6. Numbers. Spell out numbers 1 to 9, and use figures for 10 and above.

For example, "We have two cars and 12 children."
-- Spell out a number at the beginning of a sentence.

Wrong: "120 children are in the fourth grade."

Right: "One hundred and twenty children
are in the fourth grade."
Or,
"There are 120 children in the fourth grade."

It is OK to start a sentence with the number of a year: "2001 has been an exciting year."

Practice your editing skills with the story below, and then edit your own story.
A large family of bats is pretty scary. They have started living on the roof of hammond elementary. Every night at that time of day when the sun is just going down they fly off the roof and circle overhead in search of food and then after about 1 hour they all return to the roof to sleep for the night. "Bats help the environment by eating mosquitoes and other harmful insects", says Mrs. Robbbertson, our science teacher.

Tips from the Pros

TIPS FROM THE PROS
You've just been assigned to write a story for your newspaper. Here are some tips to help you write a good one.
Who - What - When - Where - Why - How
Almost all newspaper stories start off by answering most of these questions. Try to answer these questions in your story. For example: "Sherry Smith won first place in the Cutest Pet contest yesterday at Columbia Mall." Check your local newspaper for more examples.

Accuracy
Your writing might be wonderful, but if you don't get the facts right, people won't believe what you write the next time. Make sure everything you say is true. And spell people's names correctly — they get upset when you don't.
What makes a good story? Anything that could interest or affect your classmates, teachers, school or family will make a good story. For example, science topics like the strange worlds of the planets and how the weather works … school activities such as fund-raisers, what goes on in music classes, and the importance of safety patrols … after-school activities … a review of a book you enjoyed … or how middle school will be different from fourth grade all could make good newspaper stories. Be curious. Ask yourself, "What would I like to know more about?" — then write a story about it.

Interviews
You may want to interview someone to get the facts. Here's what to do:
• Make an appointment. Call or meet with the person, tell them what kind of a story you want to write, then set a time and place for the interview.
• Prepare questions. Write down the questions you want to ask. For example, "How long have you been working here?" "What do you like most about your job?" and "Is there anything you would like to tell our readers?"
• Take tools. Take a small notebook and two pens or pencils to the interview.
• Write it down. Take notes as the person answers your questions — you want to be sure to quote the person accurately in your story. It's OK to ask the person to repeat what they said or ask them what they mean if you don't understand them the first time. The main thing is to get it right.

Research
Use encyclopedias, dictionaries, almanacs and other reference materials to get the facts you need. More and more reporters are doing their research on the Internet. Research includes interviewing people — such as a professor or doctor or coach — who know the facts. And your research may be just your own observation of an event: for example, reporting on the visit of a policeman and his dog to your class.

Writing the story
Start with a good lead — a sentence that grabs your reader and makes her want to read more — for example, "The fourth grade class painted one wall of their classroom with a picture so strange that their teacher immediately sent for the principal." Write your story plainly so that everyone can understand it. If possible, use quotes in your story to make it more interesting - for example, "The flames were so hot I thought my helmet would melt," the firefighter said. And remember to answer the questions Who - What - When - Where - Why - How.

Journalism Vocabulary

Handout 4: Newspaper Vocabulary
(Adapted from TAJE Journalism Curriculum Guide & Newspaper Curriculum Guide )

* 5W'S & H The essentials of any story: who, what, when, where, why, and how
* ADVERTSING Space in a publication sold to other businesses; display ads usually contain headlines, illustrations, copy, a call for action and information to identify the business
* ALIGNMENT Refers to the justification of text at its margins; left, right, centered, justified
* BEAT A specific area assigned to a reporter for regular coverage
* BOLD Type which appears darker than surrounding type of the same family; used for emphasis
* BY-LINE Indicates who wrote the story; often includes the writer's title
* CAPTION The portion of the layout which explains what is happening in a photograph. Also called cutlines. Often includes a photo credit.
* COLUMN A vertical division of layout which aids in giving structure to a page
* DOMINANT The largest photograph on a layout
* EDITOR Has overall responsibility for the publication
* EDITORIAL A type of story which serves to express an opinion and encourage the reader to take some action
* ETHICS A standard of conduct based on moral beliefs
* FACT A statement that can be proven. Not an opinion
* FEATURE A story written with some interpretation that goes beyond just reporting the facts
* FLAG The name of the paper that usually appears at the top of page one
* GRAPHICS The use of lines, screens, boxes, large initial letters etc. to enhance a design by breaking up areas
* GRID SYSTEM A system of layout in which the page is divided into small units which are filled in
* HAMMER A form of headline consisting of a few very large words over a smaller subheadline
* HEADLINE Large type designed to summarize a story and grab the reader's attention
* HUMAN INTEREST An element of news that includes people or events with which the audience can identify; stories that are just interesting
* INTERVIEW A question and answer session between a reporter and source to get information for a story
* INVERTED PYRAMID A style of writing most commonly applied to news stories in which the most important facts appear early in the story and less important facts later in the story
* KICKER A short (one or two word) statement at the beginning of a caption that serves to grab the reader's attention
* LEAD The beginning of the story which serves to summarize the story and/or grab the reader's attention
* LIBEL Written defamation; damaging false statements against another person or institution that are in writing or are spoken from a written script
* NEWS Information delivered about an event shortly after it has occurred
* OP-ED Opinion/Editorial; refers to the pages in a publication that express the opinion of the writer
* OPINION A statement which cannot be proven.
* QUOTATION A statement make by another person included in a published story. A direct quotation is exactly what the person said and appears inside quotation marks. An indirect quote is a paraphrase of what a person said and does not appear in quotes.
* REPORTER Person who researches and generally writes stories assigned by editors
* REVIEW A form of editorial written to comment on a play, movie, piece of music or some other creative work
* SANS SERIF Type with no extension at the letters which is easier to read at large sizes
* SERIF An extension at the end of certain letters which make the type easier to read at text sizes
* SLANDER Spoken defamation; damaging false statements against another person or institution that are spoken
* SPREAD Two facing pages that are designed as one unit
* STAFF BOX A box containing the names of the staff members
* STORY A block of text on a single topic beginning with some form of a lead followed by the body that contains quotations and transitions
* TEXT WRAP Adjusting the appearance of text to follow the shape of a graphic
* TRANSITION The portion of the story which helps the reader move from one point to the next: helps a story flow, adds information, and explains other items in the story
* UNDERLINE A smaller headline set under the main headline that is approximately the same length as the main headline
* WHITE SPACE The portion of a page with nothing on it used to draw a viewer into the other elements on the page

Agenda 9/30

1. Quiz on Ch. 2

2. View and respond to new additions to web page

3. Work on articles, edit, and save into folder for publishing on the Sotacrat & Chronicle online

Viewing Outfoxed Questions

1. What are some of the techniques used by Fox News that are shown in the movie that appear to "bias" the news presentation?



2. What other examples of news "bias" have you observed in local or national or cable news?




3. Do you think that "fair and balanced" correctly depicts the journalism that you read or see? Should the news be based on "news judgment"? Is cable news too opinionated?